29 janeiro, 2007

...diD yOu faLL...



...diD yOu faLL...


gasping voices and dried up tears
stream down bodies with chained hearts
whispering memories with drowning fears
of the silent allowness they're part

emotional, the name and the lable
non conforming lifes hating loath
lost wandering souls who are hated
insecure child craving for love

did you fall? fom high above
did you let yourself crawl
resigning to the sad forces?
did you cry? glass cold eyes
did you wished you were not alive
giving in the long lost hope?

broken hearts that felt to pieces
confused minds that ripped down through
glancing flashes of wanted freedoom
from those whose lifes need love

emotional, the doom and the curse
shatered souls to whom they call, emo
desperate tries from those whose eyes
saw bloody tears in the mirror...


by: nesS

7 comentários:

Anónimo disse...

Não gostei :P

"Dark" demais para o meu gosto. Sabes que gosto de escrita leve...

Beijos

Anónimo disse...

lol inda me lembro de kuando me obrigast a paxar o poema pa uma folha...eu tava kuase a morrer ao tfone xD
honestamente n tenhu jeito pa comentarios...mas como tu me obrigas xD
honestamente...partilho da msm opiniao do spec...n gostei, ta mt sem sentidu...mt geral, sobre uma coisa ke sao sentimentos do mundo, mas n de nos mesmos...

Anónimo disse...

eu gostei.

gosto de "Dark" :D sabes q sim.

beijo *

Andre disse...

Heya, nice poem,
greetz,
André

Anónimo disse...

nice blog, xxxx tim =)

Anónimo disse...

LOL...passaste.t d vez ines LOL...but emo style rox ( só a roupa msm LOL).

Unknown disse...

good poem
>_<